Your Eyes


Your eyes open to me again like ancient doors

and I yearn to enter the dark obsidian cavern of your heart.

Light a fire there and cook in my earthenware pots,

feed you my unbridled love,

this hot and tender melancholy that you breathe into me.

7 thoughts on “Your Eyes

  1. gdalexander says:

    The first line of this poem caught me. Well written.

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  2. Jacque says:

    One of the most beautiful pieces I’ve read in a long time…and the pic–damn!

  3. Pua Nani says:

    You are too kind Jacque 🙂 Yes lately I’ve been having fun playing dress up

  4. Aphrodite says:

    beautiful poem. I can recognize myself in this writing.

  5. Pua Nani says:

    Thanks, that’s a meaningful compliment

  6. simi69 says:

    Mind blowing poetry

  7. Pua Nani says:

    Reblogged this on eroticapoetica and commented:

    Eyes open; eyes closed. eyes open, eyes closed. There is nothing so agonizingly tempting as the tease of giving and taking away. And now I want you again.

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